You do not acknowledge
The serpent around your neck
Nor
Pay heed to that crushing feeling in your chest
Instead you imagine
You are a bird
Your eyes are clear and you spie
The very fabric of the sky
Wielding like unteathered kite
If you could write
A story about the world below
You’d tell a tale of an unknowing girl
Who by her fate
Fell into a well
Too deep for recovery
And at night
Espying the free bird
Sent her heart
While her body, a poor glove
Dried into shapes of shadow
The girl flew
High above her earthly prison
Weightless, painless, without burden
And when she cried, it was not
The cry of pain or loss
But a new sound, like being born
Once more
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Lovely rhythm, and joined by the rhyme in the middle of the poem.
Most excellent..
Beautifully evocative and in a rhythm that felt perfectly natural. Wonderful.
Wonderful <3
Astral travelling ?
You amaze me.
Oh my, Candace just half an hour ago I wrote a poem about falling down a well or being dropped. I just love this poem so much. I think I have to reblog it. Gorgeous. <3
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Continually astounding writing. <3
Keep flying, girl
Speechless because this is just wonderful
This reminds me of the final stanza of “To Althea, from Prison” by Richard Lovelace:
Stone Walls do not a Prison make,
Nor Iron bars a Cage;
Minds innocent and quiet take
That for an Hermitage.
If I have freedom in my Love,
And in my soul am free,
Angels alone that soar above,
Enjoy such Liberty.
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From TheFeatheredSleep, a song of freedom
Beautiful!
Beautiful. An awesome piece
Candice, this takes my breath away. Exquisite, perfect writing. Plus I was there with you, flying beside you, free.
We are. Or we will be. In one reality or another. And you’ll be my neighbor in that reality.
Thanks so very much 💓💓💓
Thanks so very much 💓💓💓
I love your quotes my friend this is perfect. Beautiful and so true I must read this when I feel imprisoned by this illness it will help thank you so much for your support it makes a big difference
I can’t thank you enough this is what I needed to read
Thanks so very much dearest M
I shall try my friend. At the sixth month mark. I inadvertently set myself up by assuming I’d see some improvement by now but the virus waxes and wanes and so right now I’m very bad BUT everything I read says it DOES go away and you can fully recover so I try to have hope. Some days I fail but friends like you help a lot.
Thank you so very much dearest one 💓
Like minds?! 😉
Thank you very much 💓 dear Eric
Thank you so very much dearest em
You got it! 😉
Thank you so very much 💓
💓
Always thinking of you, Candy
💓
🙂 happy dance 🙂
[making happy face]
Most definitely, dear Candice. 💕
Soft hugs
Meaningful, wonderful and powerful words and poetry. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts.
Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
Reblogged this on Women Who Think Too Much by Jeanne Marie and commented:
Love this…
Your writing is an experience to be dwelt on, thought over, immersed in
I was just pretending to be a bird today, how wonderful your words. Nice.