Ever in “evens” are we hopeful, Ever in “evens” yet we are sad, Ever in “evens” do we still feel love and the truths it brings in hopes of eventual peace and beautiful connections
“Testing the dura
Of oxygen
Without you
Even thirst
Has no desire”
Those lines touch my soul, I started to cry uncontrollably. These is by FAR my favorite piece of you, I cannot put my words……. You are one of those souls that……. You know what I mean Candice, I am sure you know what I mean. Thank you for continuing writing and what is even more, sharing it with us. Thank you!!!
That’s funny because people really like my shorter poems and I like my longer ones (I think I’m a navel gazer) I know my shorter ones really get the best feedback and I often put them in my books because of that. I am thankful to you and glad you liked this one xo
Beautiful! “Even thist has no desire”… I love these two lines (the rest of them too, but… you know what I mean :P)
I do dear one and thank you!
Ever in “evens” are we hopeful, Ever in “evens” yet we are sad, Ever in “evens” do we still feel love and the truths it brings in hopes of eventual peace and beautiful connections
Such is great loss. Ah, but rendered with simple elegance.
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TheFeatheredSleep renders the feeling of loss.
wow.
🙂 (thank you)
When you write micropoems, you do them justice… especially here: “Without you
Even thirst
Has no desire”
💓💓💓
“Even thirst
Has no desire”
Mind blowing and very truthful. Your words carry the honesty of heart.
One of my favorite poems of this year.
Wow thank you Asimov, coming from you that means a great deal.
You welcome.
This is perfect, Shieldmaiden. 💕
#Nice!!!
Thank you dear Eric
superbly, simply, stated
“Testing the dura
Of oxygen
Without you
Even thirst
Has no desire”
Those lines touch my soul, I started to cry uncontrollably. These is by FAR my favorite piece of you, I cannot put my words……. You are one of those souls that……. You know what I mean Candice, I am sure you know what I mean. Thank you for continuing writing and what is even more, sharing it with us. Thank you!!!
That’s funny because people really like my shorter poems and I like my longer ones (I think I’m a navel gazer) I know my shorter ones really get the best feedback and I often put them in my books because of that. I am thankful to you and glad you liked this one xo
It was my pleasure, it is always my pleasure Candice. How are you feeling today?
Breathtakingly powerful! Resonating with this one, Candice.
Powerful in its simplicity 🙂
Thank you xo