Fingers
outline the space
removed
by you
straining to see
that circle completing
us
it stays beyond your
loosening
a scattering of time and memory
ash as fire
once burned
now shapes are
all we have left
in dust
Fingers
outline the space
removed
by you
straining to see
that circle completing
us
it stays beyond your
loosening
a scattering of time and memory
ash as fire
once burned
now shapes are
all we have left
in dust
Ah, this is amazing. 💕
Thank you lovely one – so much xo
Always. 😊
I really like this short and sweet with a punch. Well done <3
Thank you very much my friend!
🙂
Amazing, do I have to say more. You are just amazing
This was so short for you I thought I missed some of it – th en discovered no, it was the dust 🙂
“A scattering of time and memory “….. Beautiful, true and heart touching. Thank you!
Ever so clever words scratched in the dust of memorty, Feathers! 🙂 <3
Thank you dearly Natalie!
My pleasure sweet sweet, belles plumes❣️😘
Superconcise
A rare thing but a thing nonetheless! 😉
True such depth in your beautiful penned words. Lovely picture too.👌👌👌👌👌
Candice, you say so much SO eloquently!!! Me, I’m a man with so few word…